Part I Writing

Used Course Books on Sale

I'm a sophomore from Department of English.Since I have finished the courses of the first year, I decide to sell all of my used course books.第一段进行简单的自我介绍,然后直接引入写作话题:出售旧教科书。

The course books include reading, writing, translation, as well as listening. 本句根据写作要求介绍所售旧教科书的品种。 If any one of your course books were missing, you could consider buying mine.Some of those course books are almost new, even without any notes on them.本句介绍这些旧教科书的新旧程度,可以用almost new, half new等描述。 You can get them at half of their original price.本句指出销售的价格,可以用at half of their original price, a discount of 50 percent, 50 percent off等描述折扣。 I'd like to note that if you buy 10 of my books at a time, I will present two tutorial books as a gift.本句和下一句都是对于价格的引申,指出一次性购买多少本可以得到什么赠品。 The two tutorial books were helpful when I prepared for my Test for English Majors-Grade-4.Thanks to those two books, I passed the test with a high mark.本句特别说明赠品的吸引人之处。抓住了人们会因为赠品买东西这一消费心理。 Gifts are limited, so first come first served.本句是广告中常用的宣传语,只要有赠品就可以这么表达。

If you are interested in buying those used course books, please come to my dormitory and have a look.You can contact me at the number 15200006666.I am available at 7:30 p.m.every day.本句按照写作要求交代卖家的联系方式,并指出方便联系或者拜访的时间。

旧教科书出售

我是一名英语系的大二学生。由于我已经上完了一年级的课程,所以我打算出售所有旧教科书。

这些教科书包括阅读、写作、翻译和听力方面的。如果你的教科书有丢失的,可以考虑购买我的。我这些教科书有的几乎是新的,甚至没有任何笔记。花原价的一半价钱你就可以得到它们。我想强调一下,如果你一次性购买10本书,我会赠送你两本辅导用书。这两本辅导用书在我备考英语专业四级考试的时候非常有用。多亏这两本书,我以高分通过了这项考试。赠品有限,先到先得。

如果你有兴趣购买这些旧教科书,请来我的宿舍看一看。你可以拨打15200006666这个电话号码与我联系。我每天晚上7点半都在。

要点用法

sophomore 大二学生

helpful 有用的

be interested in… 对……感兴趣

Department of English 英语系

Test for English Majors-Grade-4 英语专业四级考试

dormitory 宿舍

course book 教科书,教材

have a look 看一看

missing 丢失的,下落不明的

thanks to 多亏,由于

contact 联系

original price 原价

limited 有限的

available 有空的

at a time 一次

first come first served 先到先得,先到者先接受的服务原则

tutorial book 辅导用书,教辅书

句法点评

1.Since I have finished the courses of the first year, I decide to sell all of my used course books.

本句是一个复合句,since引导的是原因状语从句,主句是I decide to sell all of my used course books.

2.If any one of your course books were missing, you could consider buying mine.

本句是一个复合句,属于if条件状语从句与虚拟语气连用的情况,从句若与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用过去式,如果谓语动词由系动词充当,则无论主语是单数还是复数,均用were, 若主句与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用should/could/would/might+动词原形。

3.The two tutorial books were helpful when I prepared for my Test for English Majors-Grade-4.

本句是一个主从复合句,when引导时间状语从句。

4.If you are interested in buying those used course books, please come to my dormitory and have a look.

本句是一个主从复合句。if引导条件状语从句,逗号后面的祈使句是主句。